Example of CYOL- EATC
Example of CYOL- EATC
Team_Switzerland_:) on Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:02 pm
Hi. Here are the rules for CYOL.
1. Don't post in someone else's CYOL.
2. No language allowed
3. You're not allowed to kill anyone off
4. This is written in first person "me" is you.
That's it, let's go to the example.
(This is an Edward, I'm taking the place of Bella).
NOTE: This is NOT going to be true to the book.
As I walked in the cafeteria, one face stood out. Bronze hair all over the place, he smiled a crooked smile and laughed an angellic laugh. I tried my best not to stare into his topaz eyes, but my willpower melted into a pool which I left behind as I stepped toward the table my friends were sitting at. I didn't realize he was staring back until he got up out of his seat and walked toward me. I had about five seconds to collect myself and then he got to me. He had a warm smile as he muttered something too low to hear and then turned to face me.
"Hello. I don't think we've met. Isabella Swan, correct?" He spoke to me for the first time. His voice was low and smooth, like honey.
"Yes, but I prefer Bell-" I managed to stutter before he interrupted me.
"I'm so sorry! I've been impolite! I forgot to introduce himself. I'm Edward Cullen." He said again in his honey voice.
Edward- such a strange name. Seems very- 1917.
"Hello, Edward. Good to meet you." I barely spoke loud enough to be talking in a normal voice, but apparently he heard me.
"I really should go, my family will be angry if I don't come with them." I blinked, and he was gone. I sighed. I had time to befriend him, but of course, I blew it.
TBC... I'll finish later!
1. Don't post in someone else's CYOL.
2. No language allowed
3. You're not allowed to kill anyone off
4. This is written in first person "me" is you.
That's it, let's go to the example.
(This is an Edward, I'm taking the place of Bella).
NOTE: This is NOT going to be true to the book.
As I walked in the cafeteria, one face stood out. Bronze hair all over the place, he smiled a crooked smile and laughed an angellic laugh. I tried my best not to stare into his topaz eyes, but my willpower melted into a pool which I left behind as I stepped toward the table my friends were sitting at. I didn't realize he was staring back until he got up out of his seat and walked toward me. I had about five seconds to collect myself and then he got to me. He had a warm smile as he muttered something too low to hear and then turned to face me.
"Hello. I don't think we've met. Isabella Swan, correct?" He spoke to me for the first time. His voice was low and smooth, like honey.
"Yes, but I prefer Bell-" I managed to stutter before he interrupted me.
"I'm so sorry! I've been impolite! I forgot to introduce himself. I'm Edward Cullen." He said again in his honey voice.
Edward- such a strange name. Seems very- 1917.
"Hello, Edward. Good to meet you." I barely spoke loud enough to be talking in a normal voice, but apparently he heard me.
"I really should go, my family will be angry if I don't come with them." I blinked, and he was gone. I sighed. I had time to befriend him, but of course, I blew it.
TBC... I'll finish later!
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